Pg. 32
At first I thought I was struggling through the pacing of the first chapter at this rate. Long form web comics that update only once a week seem to crawl to the next point in the story and when you’re wanting to build suspense, it’s really not a fun thing as a reader to have to wait for sometimes a month or two at a time to get there.
One of the things you do get to enjoy though is going back through it all once it’s finished and see how everything flows. A couple more pages, and we’ll get to some action. I promise. 🙂